Transcript Analysis
Participants: Mille
(M) and Ella (E).
Transcript analysis of a communication exercise.
The communication exercise took place in the school
cafeteria at 2:30pm, in a fairly busy environment so background noise can be
heard throughout the entirety of the recording (although the majority of this
murmur is not written/recorded due to an unnecessary inclusion).
At [00:00 seconds] (M) begins to communicate with (E),
immediately using informal jargon to communicate her point across. The colloquial
use of “gonna” is expressed throughout the transcript creating imagery of an
informal situation. The micro-pauses (.) and pauses (n*) throughout the
transcript/recording let us know that the speech is not rehearsed but
spontaneously thought of in order to make sense of what was trying to be
communicated towards (E). (Although forms of micro-pauses are obligatory or
completely necessary and numbered or timed pauses could be included to leave
time to follow complex instructions given by the main speaker). Other forms of
delayed expressions are also used, including the phrase “hang on” and
continuous stalling by asking questions for clarification from (M) to (E) such
as: “is that right?”; “Which side are you doing?” and “on which side?”. The paralinguistic tone of voice in these
questions is significantly different to the rest of the sentences which don’t
include questions.
At [00:30] (M) begins to leave longer pauses between words.
Giving her time to assess what she will say to (E). The sentence that (M) says
is obviously clearer to (E) this is
shown when (E) replies with a short, one worded answer; “Okay”, to clarify to
(M) that what she said was made clear. After
this communication the language between the two subjects becomes less clear,
including more questions to and from (M) and (E) with a significant rise in the
number of micro-pauses (.) included, with a maximum waiting time of (5)seconds.
This long wait between words and at the end of sentences not only gives the
impression that what (M) was trying to communicate was complicated or complex
to both subjects but also that subject (E) needed time to assess and clarify
what she was going to do post instruction. The clarification word that comes
across strongest is the term “Right?//right.” This shows the reader that the two
participants have formed an unconscious “safe” word to communicate affectively.
At the end of the transcript the language begins to alter.
Shifting dramatically from standard communication (back and forth) to a communication
whereas participant (M) begins to [laugh] repeatedly throughout. This sudden outburst
ends the communication exercise.
You evaluate what to focus on really well and show how techniques combine to give an overview - this skill is really emerging beautifully; you could still work on planning to make sure you lay out your point, exemplify it with all the aspects you want to cover and then tentatively explore the reasons/effects in context. Check affect/effect. The ellision "gonna" creating 'imagery' doesn't quite work - stick to figurative language creating imagery and use 'creates' or 'suggests' in cases like this - what you want to focus on is how an informal register is created. You are starting to pepper your writing with terminology - you missed an easy trick when you used 'question' instead of 'interrogative'. Crowbar as many terms as you can in!
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